Well I like the drums, but i think if you were gonna make it so short, you should have let it loop better, instead of just dropping of the sound like that. The main rhythm is kind of annoying, however because id doesn't fit in with the rest of the loop. It sounded like the 3xOsc default, which is ugly.
But good job overall! Could you do me a favour and review my songs? Dont worry, you'll be a lot better than me soon :)