This is an okay piece for your first. Though a bit repetitive it still is good. Try adding in more melody. Maybe try a harmony. What are you using to create this? I use Garageband on iPad Pro and it gives me the ability to use other options to add my own musical quirks along with the loops. If this isn't a use of loops and you are creating them good job. Feel free to critique my work.
Author Comments
This is my first song. The "unprofessional" elements are evident here, but I still hope you enjoy :)
M310N-Music responds:
Thank you for your reply. I made this song about a year ago, and I don't even know what I was doing back then, but I felt like this was one of the better ones, so I posted it.
Yes, it is a bit repetitive and needs more melody.
Here, listen to this song: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/769339
It's a new song in the same album. I feel like that one's much better :)
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 170
- Score
- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Oct 9, 2017
- 3:12 PM EDT
- Genre
- Dance
- File Info
- Song
- 5.5 MB
- 4 min 51 sec
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