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(The ninth song of 'The Archer Girl', telling stories with the song)

What happened next after the "Strive And Survive"?

Listen to the previous episode, "Strive And Survive" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/763428

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"You and Ari's team walks through the huge deserted valley. There's nothing there, except some dead bodies lying on the ground. You step back as you look at the gigantic rat crawling over to one of the bodies.

It's been hours since your team continues to walk towards Base E, which is at the far end of the valley. The sun begins to set, and you could see the strange aura of the clouds turning red and orange. You feel tired and weak. And so is everybody else. All walks slowly, feeling tired.

Just then, you hear the strange noise behind you. The sound was so familiar you could feel your strength coming back immediately.

"Did you hear that?" Ari asks. She is right beside you.

"Yes," you reply with a sigh of exhaustion. "I heard that too."

"I've heard that sound before," Ari says, "what was it?"

Just then, you hear a scream behind you. You turn round. You see few teammates pointing towards the distant. You look.

Zombies are coming towards your team. There were about 20 of them, but the numbers grow larger by every second. 40... 70... 90...
Hundreds of zombies now begin to surround your team from every direction.

"On your masks, quickly!" Ari says.

You immediately put on your filter mask. As you turn on the filters, you breathe in fresh air. You take a look around. Everyone is on their masks, with their filters on. But you have no clear idea how to destroy all these zombies. You see them slowly coming toward you, fuming out toxic.

But just then... One person runs straight towards the zombies, without wearing a filter mask!

"Jake!" Ari shouts out, "Are you insane?"

Zombies run like crazy towards Jake. They try to collapse him. He cries with pain and agony as the pressure of zombies pushing him becomes harder. You can't see Jake because there are too many zombies that were covering him. You suddenly hear his voice.

"Go! Let me take care of these zombies! I'm already infected, so it's no use of going with you guys! I'm going to blast them! Go! GO NOW!"

"But what about YOU?" Ari shouts out. Her eyes are now wet with tears.

"Come on, kiddo!" Commander Rex pulls Ari.

The whole team starts to run from the zombies. Still, hundreds of zombies still try to collapse Jake while few follow you and your team. Ari pulls out her bow and arrow and shoots them. You help her by shooting electric guns at them. You see gun fires shooting from behind your back. Everyone else is helping you. Soon all knock down.

Just then, you see a huge explosion in the distance. You lie down immediately to prevent the impact and the falling debris.
As the explosion ceases, you look at the place where Jake was there.

No sign of Jake.

Ari looks at the scene with tragic eyes. Tears stream down her cheeks again. Everyone quietly starts to cry also.

"Jake was one of our warriors," Ari said, with a shaking voice, "and a great scientist. He was the one who saved us all by creating these filters and weapons. We should never forget his work and sacrifice."

Few moments of pause. You hear Ari taking a deep breath.

"Let's go, everybody." She finally says."

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Composed, Mixed and Story by Jessie Yun
Created with GarageBand iOS (iPhone Version)
And iSymphonic Orchestra VST (iOS)

Cover artist : BelleDeesse
Link : http://www.wallpaperup.com/98283/Tomb_Raider_2013_Archers_Warriors_Rain_Games_Girls_rain.html

I made this just for fun, but if you have any comments/review/advice for this song, I'd love to hear it!