Wow, First thing that came out of my mouth. This is very unique and i really love the build up the rises and the drop, nothing felt stale. I was interested the whole way through. This literally gave me chills down the back in the middle of the song. somethings that i think you can improve on is the whole song was going for dark mystic mysterious and at the same time it was melodic then at 3:15 it kind of changed to random noises which kind of snapped me out of the melodic grove. For fixing this i really cant help you there because i am struggling with trying to keep the theme of the song the same theme in my transitions. So the advice i have is maybe use what you did in the first 10 sec but instead off have the last note go up kind of like risers have it go down. If that makes any sense. Anyways love the song, Keep making more and everything will turn out fine xD
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