Fuck

lolno, the only constructive critisicm I can offer is to do the exact opposite of this.

Uhm...

I think it could be a good song, but it would need a lot of work, y'know?

It's a good beat, but the sounds are horrible. Plus, it's way too repetitive, considering how simple it is. So...Yea.

... that was wack.

that did nothing but hurt my ears. i think that this was one of your old song, am i right?
cos that had nothing...
but... an attepmt, so....