Not bad at all, but the drop could use a bit of that intensity that the original had

not bad, i'm trying to learn dubstep as well!

Really good Dubstep. The worst part about it (About most dubstep) Is repetitive 85-120 BPM along with repetitive sounds, some artists use certain breaks in between using some of the lower bass sounding noises (Dex Arson, Xtrullor, And most importantly in your case, Rukkus) I also think you should try doing a second drop that has a similar build up to it as the first drop but has some new sounding noises and make sure the second drop uses more noises and sounds faster. anyway wdym you think it sucks?

It isn't that bad!

Would like to use this in a Geometry Dash level. Like this version better than the original.