I don't think that this is bad at all. You put effort into it. Nothing really stands out, though. There isn't one verse that makes me go "woah". It is a little repetitive. Otherwise, this is good! :)
Gotta say, the melody is awesome, but the wierd sounds between it doesn't really match to be honest...
I just copied the pace of the original really. (atleast I thought I did?) I usually change up alot more when I remix/cover. *shrugs*
Thanks for the review! Perhaps next time, my work will be more suited to your liking~ :>
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