Umm, I don't know what to say :/
The vocals are out of place, a bit repetitive, very little variation, lazy structure and sounds like you just slapped everything on the template and rendered it.
If you need some help on vocals, just shoot me a message, I specialize in vocal music and I'm willing to help you create better music!
This. Is. AWFUL.
The structure is lazy and everything (AND I MEAN LITERALLY EVERYTHING) seems out of place and overall just a complete mess!
I'm planning a funeral for my ears in a few days. Thanks.
Its an okay remix. It's really annoying though!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
*Cover / remake of a third-party piece.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.