good

its okay

although its not metal its techno or watever you call it its not good but its not that bad.

You Could do better

I Gave it ten because you atleast tried it wasn't that great though =0

You tried and failed, but also won

I commend you for trying, but I don't really like the instrumentation. The bass drum was too loud and too frequent, not to mention the few cymbals/hi-hat thingie's were a bit "fake" sounding. The guitar sound wasn't all that good, but here's some friendly advice:

If u don't have FL, consider getting it, it has a bunch of stuff that you can use to make all kinds of stuff. And if you're going to ge3t it, or already have it, use FL Slayer (Comes with it) to synthesize Overdrive/Distorted Guitar.

A Honest Reviewer,
Armymenis12

P.S. Check out my stuff when you have tyhe time :)