I didn't wear headphones and put the music volume to the max cause everyone knows the louder the volume the better the song sounds. BUT a good song is interesting to hear even when quiet. Sounds ethnic, not really dancy. Maybe should have put this song in a different genre. Still as a first attempt to do a dance song, you faired quite well. Maybe make it more dancy and maybe better clarity cause I hear alot of fuzzies in the loud parts of your song. You also loop your song twice rather than changing stuff around. I guess this song can be a dance party in a foreign country. I'm giving you a good score since your first dance submission so bye for now.
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