I saw this in NGCHIPS III. This was priceless. Loved it all the way! :D
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My entry for CHIPS III which somehow got 1st place :D.
Lately I feel like I've experimented with a lot of different genres in order to find myself musically. For the longest time my music has been all about trying to copy artists I respect like Envy and Savant, but I feel like I've come to the point where I want to make music that represents me and nobody else.
This track incorporates all my music style, and though it might not have the highest production value, this is certainly the piece I'm the most proud of, cuz it feels like my first ever original work. I don't really know what to put as a genre for this, so I'll just put Fusion. Hope you like it :). Constructive feedback is appreciated as always :D.
For you guyz who listened to this in chips, I re-did the vocals and did some pitch-correction.
Lyrics are in norwegian
Lyrics(poor translation, doesn't work directly translated + I cheated a bit grammar-wise to make it fit X3) I'll let them be open for interpretation :3:
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Beginning:
Beautiful Jonathan
Will you get to look at him?
Beautiful Jonathan
Don't you want to look at him?
Earth turns to water
Can't you look at him?
Beautiful Jonathan
Aren't you going to look at him
Hook:
Can you leave
So that I can understand
Who you are today
And can I get...... so that you know....
Woooah
***This is a NGUAC first round review. Forgive me if it is short, there are a hundred songs to get through!! Further rounds will be MUCH more in detail on your review!!***
This is so original, and great.
Overall however, the harmonized vocals, are never lined up, those are very important to put extra work to line up your syllable, there were a couple moments of hesitiation in your FINAL mix where you were trying to line up with yourself.
As well as the mixing, when there are the big moments with drums, there is SO MUCH GOING ON, that everything needs to be balanced to be clean and clear.
Great job, extremely original. Well done.
Good luck in the NGUAC
Haha, the funny thing is I think New Found Muse is better, but that's the style. Parts of this song aren't my fav, but that's my taste. The best part would have to be 2:05 to 2:42. The guitars and orchestral stuff mixes nicely, but I can't stand that wind instrument after it xD. The bit at 3:20 is also pretty good. Personally, I don't like the vocals but I hate 95% of vocals and the guitars afterwards are perfect. Scratch that, the best part is 3:53 to 4:17. I can see lots of people would like the length of the song. That weird sci-fi lead thing and the guitars somehow work together!
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