Cool

Yeah man, you have some cool stuff going on, but I think what would be better would be if it were more unified - like, if there weren't the gaps between sections, or if there were a steady beat.

Get a 303 for some seriouse trip

If you want some trippy sounds then get a 303 some rather high punchy and snappy drums and a Psy-trance like bass line. Trippy is more on the sound FX Side more than bizarre synthesizer choice. Listen to some Psy-Trance (try Di.FM) and take a listen to some :]

It's a little dry and all the synths go with each other, start with some chords and build from there, there is also a high pitched whine on the arp synth that hurts my ears.

lolwtf...

this is extremely unstructured and sounds more like some small loops put together... the start is... a synth loop with a completely different techno loop with a small drum pattern... sounds so horribly off-note, it makes me want to kill something
then................................... a panning thing with an effected snare?

wtf

and a dance loop coming in plus the loop in the start....
...now for a lot of wet wraps put together.
and so it just restarts...
this is complete and utter audio-nonsense. as weird as it gets, also it's nearly inaudible at times.

I suggest you to try and keep structure by having the loops and samples you're using at the same tempo, and making a structured setup with verses, small bridges/fades/changes into the main part on your techno/dance/whatever you're making for a MUCH better song. Also try to not make it blindingly obvious that you're just using loops by for example making playing the synths yourself too...

:D

it's fluffy!

by fluffy i mean light on the ears which makes it sound really good. This is a great techno beat song.It changes in the middle of it and at one point becomes choppy on purpose which is very nice and original.I especially like when it starts with one beat and other ones are added to make it better.Well done, awsome song

~Review Request Club

This is... wierd.

When it started off, it sounded like a fairly standard uptempo dance tune. And the the melody we hear a bit of is cool.

Then you go through all that volume shifting...

Around 0:35, when it totally changes, for a moment, it's kinda like we've broken through a wall, out into another dimension, or something...

Then, around 0:40, that melody's kinda like an old computer game for some reason... it also reminds me of pinball tables, though I dunno why...

This is... wierd.

I listened to it maybe 6 times and... well, it's not something that I enjoyed amazingly, but it's certainly memorable and has some cool sounds. For that I give you props.