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Lost Island

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well i spent 3 days on this song so i hope it does well

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I like the climax into :11, but I think you really overuse the crashes at the beginning - it feels spammy and jarring. I’d suggest using some filtering to fade in the crashes, if not just replace them altogether. Despite the huge, dramatic build-up, the rest of the piece was very relaxed and atmospheric, which confused me a bit. The part at 1:20 doesn’t do much to give the piece a sense of variety or direction, as it’s just another synth layered on top of the pre-existing texture with the same repetitive riff. I think you really need some more variety in this piece. Usually it’s a good idea to structure your piece around strong melodic content, but I’m not hearing any here. The loop is smooth, and the piece does flow well, but overall you need to put a lot more effort into the composition and arrangement of the piece. Keep at it, Naval76. :)

4.5/10

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Jun 20, 2017
6:57 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
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2.2 MB
1 min 35 sec
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