The synths at the beginning sound really harsh and unpolished. I’d suggest removing some of the treble there. I like the atmosphere and most of the other instruments, though. The mix is indeed crisp and clear. The middle section of this piece is a little minimalistic, though, and I think my main problem with the piece is that it needs stronger melodic content. The repetitive riffs at the chorus don’t really satisfy that need, and you don’t vary a lot of the content during the second half of the piece anyway. Still, it’s a really catchy piece with a refreshing, relaxed mood. Keep at it, man. ;)
Thank you for the comprehensive feedback!
thank you haha :) !
Hey man I really like this song! Can I use it in a level I'm creating in the game Geometry Dash? Thanks for creating it! :]
Hey, thanks for the feedback man :) Sure! Go for it :3
Didn't expect to hear the high notes at the start! But after I adjusted the max volume headphones it was nice. :) Keep it UP! :D BTW How do you make music? If you use FL Studios how did you get it? :)
Hey, thanks man! Really appreciate it :). I bought Ableton Live haha, but you can find other ways to get it. Or just train with the Fl Studio Demo until you have the money.
This is really cool. Those high bendy synths actually made me smile. Which was weird cause I'm just sitting at my desk alone grinning. But that's besides the point. Very bouncy tune, and if you stick to that track every week goal I think you will be seeing some real improvement.
Thanks man! I will stick to it! Already have 3 songs done haha, just have to get the mixing right ;)
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:
* Please consider sharing revenue!