Interesting choice to put the guitar on the left side, I would have centered it and put it close to the hihat in the space. I feel the hihat sounds too synthetic, that could be replaced. This is an interesting experimental piece, interesting writing. I feel the snare could also be replaced and turned up. But melody wise, this is a pretty piece. Around 1:45 when the strings come in, the attack needs to be faster, it sounds too delayed.
Not sure if this really fits the piece, but it's a pretty piece, just needs work to bring out it's full potential. I like the way it ends too by the way, nice touch.