I don't know if you already had the scene planned out but at the start I see ashes drifting through the air, on a cold wind, empty shells of what were and could not be again, Having to move on with the ghosts of that past following your foot prints left in gathering ashes
Indeed this scene and all the storyline is already done, and I'm quite impress that you're not so far to the truth (to a certain extent)!
I don't want to say too much, no spoil :p
I'm glad you like it! :)
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