This is too downtempo to be considered trance and the instrumentation and atmosphere is kinda meh. However I do hear potential in you to get better. If I can get good, anyone can. Keep going if you're passionate about it.
Thanks man! :)
Not bad dude. The intro instrument is a little too fuzzy. And maybe you could add in a few bg effects.
Not a bad song. Has a constant tone to it. Maybe try switching the type of music instead of the same sounds over and over again. Also didn't really like the voice at around 2:18. Made the music sound bad.
I do kinda agree about 2:18 voice making this song bullshit, but i was experimenting with some stuff. :/
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