Love Original, not enough though!
I actually LOVE the original of this song especially the "scratch, clap" drumbeat.
You showed the clap well, but the scratch was imperfect.
The repeating synth was way to high pitched, it would be better if you lowered it some because it caused some unpleasant head-feelings.
The main synth definitely needed to be stronger. it was as if the main melody didn't exist.
Next time: Use the mixer.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.