if that was in 5/8, it would look really annoying on a score haha. This could also pass off as 5/4 in the beginning couldnt it?
very nice job on a nicely composed piece
be proud haha
Coming from you man, that means a lot. And yes, this would be a sight-reading nightmare, hahaha. As I said to madboss, this would sound a lot better with a more realistic piano sound and better velocity - I'm working on getting it deleted so I can re-submit. In any case, I really respect your opinion, and I'm all the more glad you liked the piece.
I loved this piece - had a lot emotions inside I think. My favourite part was the constant high tone melody in the background - like it'd be raining or something. You put that melody in great harmony with the other parts. Nice job, good melodies and a really good flowing structure.
I had only one problem: after my opinion you should have made the hey hits more softer, smoother. The songs characteristic I think requires a more softer melody-play. The song in this way is a bit too hard, harsh - and the melody not referrs to this.
But anyhow good job, I have only this minor problem with it. Congratulations and keep up the good work.
I'm glad you liked this piece - the motif in the beginning was my favorite part too. You're right about the harshness of the sound; I blame the velocity more than the composition, but I may re-submit this piece with a new piano plugin I recently came across.
Thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.