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The retro introduction was cool, then the violins, that was a great idea. Then 3..2..1, wow. Jazzy cafe.. I do not have much constructive criticism, because the song is quite good and your transitions were interesting. But the song didn't have a straight forward theme, it was all over the place, it was like Techno to Jazz then Drum n Bass. the name fits well. "Ascention"
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