Sup
Lets get things started :) I think you should play with effects some. It sounds like when I listen to it with my headphones on that its playing in mono (and mine are stereo, I checked) I obliterate this sound in my music with some stereo enhancer or flagus. Gives me an edge over the raw sounds. Some sounds were peaking a tad so you might wanna go over em a little. While I was listening to this song I could definately imagine a small beat in the background of maybe some ethnic drums doing something else. If you message me and stuff I could show you what I mean. Very good though, keep working on it and let me know when you update it :)
~Red7