Guitar too raw and loud, it needs to be buried in the mix a little bit with some reverb. That would REALLY sell this piece. I could see making the case for the vocals being more reverbed too to give it a really dreamy sound but definitely fix that guitar.

It has a sad, kind of eerie vibe to it and it really works

"Every step I take, leaves crunch up underneath my heel...I walk around, trying to find a good place to sit. I spot and old, shriveled tree. I come here to relax when the Earth makes me sad. 'Crunch crunch crunch' the leaves go when I step. Makes me feel empowered in some way. I sit under the tree, getting into a good, comfortable position. I prop my guitar up on my knee and forget the rest. I allow my feelings to be expressed with my hand through the medium of guitar."
You hear a sad song played in the wind...

I feel like I am in a graveyard with a rotten tree seeing a skeleton play the gloomy guitar... We just... Die... That's... It...

Last of us vibes kinda. I really like the guitar; sounds very good and rich. Great!