Melody isnt bad... just needs some basses in the backround and some FX and it would be totally diferent song (in a good way)
Just a bit boring to listen and for a longer period, a bit annoying.
But melody itself isnt totally bad so i advise to keep your work up :-)
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My first loop! I never realized how fast I'm making these until now. This is my fifth song(well, I guess it's a loop), and only my third day making music! Now this one IS a bit rushed, and was originally going to be a full song, but I realized that since I was tired, it was a bit repetitive, so I polished it as a loop. Enjoy :]
Brickerz responds:
Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind for my future work! And yes, I do agree that this was a bit annoying to listen to for a long period of time, I was a bit tired when I made this, so I just rushed it. I'll try not to rush as much in the future. :]
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