Melody isnt bad... just needs some basses in the backround and some FX and it would be totally diferent song (in a good way)
Just a bit boring to listen and for a longer period, a bit annoying.
But melody itself isnt totally bad so i advise to keep your work up :-)
Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind for my future work! And yes, I do agree that this was a bit annoying to listen to for a long period of time, I was a bit tired when I made this, so I just rushed it. I'll try not to rush as much in the future. :]