that drum is weaaaaaaaaak :( really the entire mix sounds like flat soda. The kit around 1:20 is cool though, but it sounds like it'd be on a faster track than this as some sort of breakbeat thing.

Yeah, it's an attempt and they all can't be winners, this track really suffers from not having a focus on one particular thing, whether that's the beat or a melody which isn't really present. It's just all kind of there. It's an instructive track and it's not obvious why it sounds bad at first.

Love chill songs :)

Super dreamy and fun to listen to. Sounds really creative too. :3

Cool

And this one has a nice vibe behind it the tune is good I could see you adding some extra sounds in the background though more deeper sounds something that will set it apart from the rest but honestly you have a nice track here and it's something I would listen to Iver and over so nice work indeed. I look forward to your next big hit so keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and some more deeper background sounds

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Another smooth and atmospheric piece! Nice work.

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