I like the song, definitely catchy, but one thing, in my opinion, is to definitely add on to the drums instead of cutting them off a bit randomly. I am no music wiz, but you cutting off the drums in an unnormal way really confuses the song. Your other song, Extreme, does a good job maintaining a good drum beat, while this one is distorted or random. If that was the purpose, nice job, but in my opinion, having a nice and steady drum beat really smooths out the song.