acid notation żądzi
acid notation żądzi
Sorry for the harsh review ! ='3
Here is, I think, the main problem of the track. There's a melody, but it's four notes. It's not enough to be a true melody. You need to build a melody which is memorable. You ought to use more notes and modulate that new melody in order it to catch the listener. For example : make an awesome melody in one part of the song, then, in the next part, use the same melody but change it a bit (more or less notes, change the tone...). Finally, hit the listener with a memorable return of the first version of your melody ! =3
To be honest, your instrumentalisation is my guilty pleasure ! Your mixing is great at some parts (that moment at 0:59, and I like how you rendered your work from 1:00 to 1:45). But your instruments need some work. First of all, I really like your drums and the 8-Bit synthesizer from 0:45 to 0:58. On the negative points, there's that reversed cymbals that is way too high-pitched at 1:45. You used a really weird bass from 2:17 to 2:31 which honestly hurts a bit. Plus, from this part, I don't know what you've done, but it's like the track is accelerating at 2:21. If that's what you wanted, well I can't say it's well done... Finally, that hat at the end of the track has nothing to do here.
Your track has not an amazing personality I'm afraid. You need parts that suit together, there must be a logical progression line. The melody needs to be more memorable. I'm still giving you a half-star because of that unusual mixing from 1:00 to 1:45 ! ^^
Melodies : 0,5/2
Instruments : 1/2
Personality : 0,5/1
I'm sure you have potential ! You have great ideas, but you need to work on the melodies, and try to use instruments that don't hurt. Looking forward to hearing your next work ! ;)
Oh it's no problem, I love honest reviews :3
The melody yes, is four notes, very simple and forgettable, something I caught onto after a bit.
I wanted to do more with my instrumentation, but before I knew how to use more in-vst settings I had mostly used mixer effects, but I'm glad you liked them a bit :p
Overall your review is very honest and spot on, and lucky for you, I am making a new song right now! The melody is a set of chords and I did some better instrumentation and mixing, hope you check it out when it's done! :p
OOOH, AWW DUDE, FUCK, THIS MADE ME HAPPY
KEEP MAKING MUSIC, FOCUS ON IMPROVING, YOU HAVE POTENTIAL. YOU'RE COOL
I LOVE YOU
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