My take on Logic's 44 Bars song! Hope you guys like it!

In this piece i'm talking to my younger self at 16 about,
Love, Dreams and everything in between trying to inspire him lol
IF ONLY, AM I RIGHT?! Lyrics below!

Verse:
Inside my new apartment, Just ponderin, life and shit,
The newest chapter, Sit down and chat, I'll invite you in,
Dear listener, prisoner, to these inner things,
They're conflictin, cognitive dissonance, hits again,
I'm on my seventh race and, the patience, runnin thin,
For seven years I been flowin, windows, are closing and,
It's starting to feel like this dream, was nothin more than a dream,
Conversations, taking place, contemplate, many things,
Inner voices, speaking horse, choice, words I receive,
telling me to hit the road pack it up and just leave,
Logan at 16, Wide eyed and naive,
Don't even know If I believe all the things he believed,
Here's what I say, to pave the way, take the pain,
from his feet,
Here's what I'd say if we were able to speak,
Lets take love cuz it ain't what it seems,
It's like a drug that'll shatter your wings,
But fly high young boy, you were born, to be king,
And swore you'd achieve many things,
What'll happen when you do?
What song will you sing?,
I spoke on love
when it ends what pain will it bring?,
And it'll end, trust me,
Just never bend, luckily,
You got your friends, till the end, when that girl dumped me,
Look I ain't come to the past, to pester you,
But perhaps, It's best you fall through the cracks,
But avoid dumpin,
your soul into another soul, Cuz when they go,
You'll feel like they stole,
What else can I tell you before I go?,
Look at you young me 16 years old,
Keep making your parents proud,
But grind harder than now,
Then by the time your my age you'll be rockin the crowds,
You'll be rockin the crowds,
And oh,
Get close to Ty were making up for it now,
And always hold your values closest,
That's where I'd close it,
Instantly see a shift in the present,
A rebel with weapons, I'm going towards my goals and that's
right where I'm headed,
Full speed, I believe, Ain't nowhere But Up,
Had to talk to my past to know who I was, X2