hmm

nice little square synth there. I like the reverb on it as well as the piano. You probably should level things out a bit more though, that big synth that comes in later drowns out everything including the drums.

The sub-bass in really loud... throw a filter or take out the mids and the highs on it. You have to feel the sub bass more than hear it.

I really liked the melodies though, you did a nice job on that. The drums were really good too, you added in a couple new samples that I liked, especially that open hi-hat. It sounded like it was reversed though. Not like that's bad, I just wouldn't have expected it.

Overall, very good job. Just work on mastering and all that fun stuff. ;)

Keep up the good work!
~cornandbeans

P.S. Could you check out my new song "I Don't Need You Anymore?" I'd love to hear your opinion on it, it's some of the best work of mine.

was really Hip-Hop

It's good though

very nice

Nice man i felt this shit, good job, peace!

-WC