A special mix of the song Horizons, which can be found on the Chapter I EP, OUT NOW! http://bit.ly/chapter-i
Recorded at Dimas Studio in Campinas, Brazil (2012; March-May 2015)
Pedro Anderson: lead vocals, songwriting, arrangement, vocal arrangement, production, mastering
Caroline Blumer: background vocals, vocal arrangement
Lyrics:
When you lose someone or something
That you always loved
You enter in despair
Like a bruise this thing hurt, this thing
Is in fact unloved
Unlike your missed pair
It's endless like a horizon
And you're full of fear
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
You're friendless, can't be enliven
You just shed all tears
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
And you always have to deal with this loss
There are no ways
To avoid these big flaws
It's endless like a horizon
And you're full of fear
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
You're friendless, can't be enliven
You just shed all tears
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
These moments of life
Are the ones you don't feel alive
Oh like the horizons
They are endless
Just like your feelings
It's endless like a horizon
And you're full of fear
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
You're friendless, can't be enliven
You just shed all tears
So you keep fearful
And can't live life
The mix is clear, but this does kind drag out to be honest. The snare is too dry. Add some more reverb / delay or what have you to make everything smoother. Lyrics are fine. Add some variation to the drum beat too.
at 3:12 wasn't sure if your vocal pitch drop was on purpose, felt out of tune with the rest of the track .
chord progression is pretty basic
overall its ok. not a fan of this specific style tho
Thanks for your feedback :) I'm gonna keep this in mind for future songs!
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*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.
pedroanderson 
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