Interesting. Its pretty obvious that this was made quite quickly x) You looped the melody adding and removing different sections :P Quite a basic principle but at least it made the track somewhat interesting, otherwise looping a melody over and over is extremely boring (Ive done it before and the track didn't end well) One thing I am curious about is where you got your drum samples from, I actually quite like them and could use them in some projects of my own. speakings of which...
Your drums were a bit all over the place with no specific rhythm in mind, they're a bit too complicated. the best drum loops are actually quite simple even if its just Kick-snare-kick-snare. Drums are there to add rhythm to a track and making them too complicated can ruin a whole song.
Here's what you need to improve upon: Adding more variety to different melodies within a song (I get that this song was made very quickly but looping a melody to add duration to a track just makes it worse... just letting you know)
You need to make your drum loops a lot simpler, as stated they are supposed to define the beat or rhythm of a track and making them too complicated has consequences.
Final score: 4/10
Not bad for a track made as quickly as this. also I meant what I said about the drum samples, Id genuinely like to know where you got them from :)