Reminds me of retro game music at first, I like the progression. Fits the picture in a strange way. I feel it is repetitive in a couple parts. The bass at 1:50 is a bit too loud and overpowers the other instruments. It's a nice vibe, but needs to be turned down a little. Overall the melody isn't much as it's few notes, and just repeats throughout the song with small variation, overall it feels the same throughout the song.
This has potential to be more with the melody, but I like everything you used for this. Creative with the percussion. I like what's here so far, just too repetitive and feels like it's going to become more that it's currently not. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the criticism. It helps for sure. Glad you liked it!
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