QUESTIONS:

Does the sharp airiness bother you or do you think it fits the mood?

Do the chords and notes sound good to you or do they seem a bit lacking?

Should I keep the intro piano or get straight into it and extend what's left to proper length?

Please tell me in your reviews

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REALLY could use some structured feedback on this, you don't have to be a composer yourself and use all the fancy words, but please don't just say it was good or it was bad. I've been gone a while because I've learned a LOT now, but am trying to find how to combine my newfound knowledge to make a full length song.

This is also why you've been getting a lot of loops and experiments as of late, but hopefully soon a full-length song will be released. Also my last 3 projects crashed, Worms from Uranus for Ssundee crashed and I lost a whole week of work, a house song I'd made crashed after about 6 hours of work and this crashed shortly after I exported it.

Luckily I kept this one because as I said, I exported it. Harmor and distortion took up so much PC load that it was almost impossible to listen to in the playlist. So I exported the first 32 bars, if it seems a bit drawn out, the later 24 bars were meant to have progressing variation, but besides some subtle resonance automation with Fruity Fast LP, I didn't get around to that.