Not bad dude!

hey i was surfing the net when i found this song!
its pretty good but heres some key pointers for your next one:

* try some bass
* maybe some flowning synth
* try not to stick to one pattern
* maybe some faster waves!
* and maybe a theme!

i know you tried really hard on this so im not reducing the orginallity and effort!
maybe just listen to some other VG songs and then learn from them and add on to yours!

your doing great dude so dont give up hope!

love the bells though!
gives me a christmas feeling

remember if you need any hlp you can always contact some light people or me!

keep up the work dude!