Actually instruments sounding simple is ok im my book as long as they blend together which is not always the case here, the main melody/lead is pretty good, but the track never gets "busy" enough, leaving me underwhelmed, and as 5TanLey said the arrangement is just wacky, you got to work on these and youll get there.
Author Comments
I was trying to create some better sounding instruments while I made this song. I at least made some more interesting sounding instruments this time!
Enjoy :)
EDIT: (if you've viewed this before refresh your cache to see changes)
- Made various changes to melodies.
- Did some additional mixing.
- Even more changes and mixing.
Art ~ http://www.deviantart.com/art/Railway-429599202
Edited With Pixlr.
Check Out Zechnition ~ https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCwevgIT2eVSnY7Gdi11VASg
Best heard with headphones.
Composed With Ableton Live 9.
Zechnition responds:
Hey, thanks for your review! I get what you are saying and can use it to make my music better. =D
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You should take more time to create melodies/harmonies, e.g. in 1:30 the instruments just doesn´t sound good together, also overall arrangement does´t make much sense to me
It seems to me that it takes too long for the main drums to come
Most of the instruments still sound very simple, even for "8-bit/videogame" standard
2:11 and 1:16 things are too loud imo
I kinda liked the intro and ending
2.5/5
Zechnition responds:
Yes, I see that some of the piano parts just don't fit together, sort of like two separate songs at once. Fixing that along with some more minor changes that you suggested. Thanks! =D
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