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the intro are not bad.... I find that it helps to appreciate the sound .... it 's really repetitive without really be bad....
otherwise i find this have leak of personnality.... it lacks personal touch.... and it's really an striped sound... You should more mastering and clear your future tracks.
This isn't terrible. 3/5 stars.
Keep up the good work! you have potential! just more mastering and better sound.