I like the piano in the beginning, but it seems to transition really weird, like it's off time or something, but the piano in here sounds candlelight meets rock from the 50s. The things that stand out here are the drums, lots of snare work and such. Not bad, maybe you should finish it?
i liked the melody of the piano and the beat, but like you said the song didn't really get anywhere.
still, its worth a listen or two, mostly because the piano is really good.
i dont want to turn it into a techno song but maybe if i put in some synth it will go somewhere