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As you might notice, this is not exactly a new track, it's "Deprature" but with much edited piano melody, well mostly some notes removed and added in place here and there. An additional instrument was added called an "Erhu", which is a two-stringed bowed musical instrument, basically a Chinese Violin. Vocals were provided by Cait McWhir. She has an incredible versatility allowing her to freely cross between conventional folklore to ancient Sanskrit chants, Vedic mantras to free improvisation in self made languages.

I've been working on this track for 3 days straight, 5-9 hours a day, and I've completely lost my mind over it. I have no idea what genre it is now, or what mood it is supposed to have. You know when you've spent listening to the same composition over and over again that you eventually cannot see what is wrong with it, it gets worse and worse. So I am going to finally leave this composition as it is, and let other people decide what this track truly is.

One thing I'd apreciate people telling me, is there too much of a pause between vocal parts? Should there be more, or less?

I guess I've got to thank @samulis for being an inspiration for this track, his theoretical knowledge and crave for authentic and diverse orchestration has moved me in more ways than one. Also a thank you to @Anarkat for knowing to never give up with your passions and just make what you "feel" is right. @Step for being a generally nice guy, offering me advice over the years about various musical subjects and @etherealwinds for inspiring me to create a vocal composition, maybe someday we can collaborate together on a track.

Instrumentation:

Piano & Strings 3 from Collosus
Low Whistle from East West RA (Played in various styles, vibrato, sustain, staccato, expressive)
Various Percussive Elements from Percusive Adventures.
Koto (Played in a tremolo style)
Erhu from East West Ra
FX (Soundtrack) from Collosus
Forgotten Voices - Cait McWhir
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Original composition by Grandvision
Composed in FL Studio 10 Producer Edition
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Released by Grandvision Studio under the Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 International license ( http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ )