still love it
Author Comments
It's been awhile guys! I've been working on this for about 5 days now, another homage to one of my favorite bands! I'm sure you can guess which one it is without much headache, haha. Let me know what you guys think! Also, headbang your fucking heads off.
Lyrics:
eating at me
cant shake this hate
i cant be free
stuck in this game
clawing my way out
skin falls from my face
no one hears me shout
cant forget this place
I
am full of trust
I
end up getting fucked
Why
does it end up this way
Try
and i get played
Why you fear me
Stop running away from me
Need something to set me free
We were never meant to be
Now to me you are nothing
terrible things happening to me
ill leave behind these things i see
taking pills to calm this ache
such a boring route to take
feeling numb to everything
cant take anymore of this pain
im lashing out at those i see
youll learn to fear me
Stop running away from me
Need something to set me free
We were never meant to be
Now to me you are nothing
I dont care what you feel
I know that this can't be real
I feel tortured inside
I've got nothing this time
(I wont give in, won't give in this time)
Creeping along
No nothings wrong
It's all unknown
Leave me alone
I like this
So this was something nice and different your lyrics made it jump for me a little and that was all a good thing you really have something here with the lyrics I think some added back end sound f/x would improve on this it has a nice style and could be even better with some extra mixture in the back end but besides that this was some cool sound you have and I encourage. You to keep up with it
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added back end sound
~X~
great track. kinda reminds me of korn
Man, this is a really great song, REALLY great, in production, everything.. well, almost everything. I think there's a lot of Korn influence in here.. I LOVE how it sounds, but it's too much like Korn. That's the only negative thing I can say. Which is hard, because it sounds so GOOD. You know how to make a hit song, but I'd like to hear you try making it your own style/voice? I hope this helps! KEEP ROCKIN' MAN
Glad to see you make metal again
FarCryDX responds:
Yeah, I go through phases! Thank you!
Credits & Info
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- Faves:
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- Downloads
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- Votes
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- Score
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4.52 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 9, 2016
- 4:18 PM EDT
- Genre
- Heavy Metal
- File Info
- Song
- 6.1 MB
- 5 min 18 sec
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