It was fine...
Yeah it was fine, not bad, not great, just fine.
Great use of a hard kick drum, it's perfect for the mood of the song. Make a melody though, you've got that one riff, and that's it, expand the idea of what you've got so far. You've got some nice FX and stuff, just make a melody. Either that, or this. Do you have Fruity Loops? I use Fruity Loops, and I'm pretty good with melodies : D
-Either way, nice ; )
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )
Alrighty. thanks for the comment :D.
Yeah I use that software too, it's one of the few good music makers around :P.