You're first "original" music (not remix) , its sure sounds great , but you're most recent music are way better , so I dont think I should recommand anything to ameliore ( also been 6 years ) .
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This song is Beach Rave like, inspired by all the great artists here on NG. This also plays on the Newgrounds stage in Indie Game Battle!
octopus58 responds:
I actually wrote my first originals before 2013 but published an original to youtube I think in 2013; but this is still technically one of my earlier works. Thank you very much though :)
This song has a great overall atmosphere, very danceable. There are enough dynamic shifts to keep the listener occupied. The only possible suggestion I would have is perhaps the modulation part stays a little too long on the same progression and the ending is a little abrupt, but those are just personal preferences. Great track! <(^.^<)
octopus58 responds:
Thanks for all the feedback! Yeah, I think the ending could have used more work xP
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