I felt it in my mouth.

k...

not to bad and i know its a test but...do u think u would make a longer 1...and its a yes or no question ok

Eh...

The thing is, when it stops in the middle of the song, and then starts again with the beats, I realized that you put them in too early. Keep trying.

sry... didn't really catch the beat

i think the beat is off, at least i'm pretty sure. if not, then i'm sry, but make sure the kick is with the beat. on the second measure, idk if you were planning to come in on the "and" of two, or like the original numa numa song, on the third beat. i didn't flame you cause you were experimenting, but i did mark you down. Make sure the tempo doesn't fluxuate.

keep trying,

really good...

alright. i think it is awsome. but you HAVE to make it longer for it to be a whole lot better. i mean, i was starting to groove to it, then it stopped. disturbing...