Good mix, though i feel in the build up around around 1:20 is boosted a bit too much and a little harsh in volume. A EQ cut might help it. It was a nice tune overall, with some catchyness. I see below others have suggested what might help and i tend to agree. The mid transition could be improved and the one synth could be lowerd a bit because like the other guy mention, it is a little overpowered. Anyway, i like your stuff. Good work man, keep it up!
Author Comments
A quick electro-chiptune track. I liked the feel of this song
Track for Underground Collective. =D
EDIT: (If you have seen the track before, refresh cache to see updated version)
~ Changed the feel of the song a little.
~ Changed some of the drums.
~ Did a bit of mixing.
~ Changed some instruments. (pluck synth)
~ Did final touches.
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Zechnition responds:
Thanks for the review! And I did change the volume around 1:20 and it sounds a lot better! =D
I really like the melody and the composition. Very well done here. Everything seems to flow quite nicely. (except for that first crash cymbal/transition, that could be better.)
I'd suggest pumping up the levels a little more. I find "commercial volume" really makes tracks more enjoyable. The overall feel if the synths is pretty good, I feel a pluck/decay synth would have made it feel a little more chiptune-y, but what you have going certainly isn't bad. @1:25 ish the lead synth is pretty dominant in the mix, evening it out with the bass a little more might be nice.
Overall, well done. Your composition is awesome, just the mastering needs some work.
Zechnition responds:
Ok, Thanks for your review! Definitely putting in that pluck synth. =D
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- 2 min 46 sec
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