Well at first. Nice concept. I liked the song.
You Sir did something, many people didn't got right. Even professional musicians.
You used an electric guitar in a Techno song and in a way it don't sound like shit.
This is great, keep that going!
Well after all the track is pretty neat, but it didn't felt like a "rising whirlwind" more like a light blow in spring/fall in the face but not like a whirlwind. Pretty calm for that. The ending is totally good, it's original I didn't heard those harsh endings for a long time and srsly for a great melody like that, I have to put this in my list when I play games. It's awesome!
You're great mate, keep the work going! :)