00:00-1:20 is nice. I fuck with music like this. Check out Eluvium and Brian Eno's Music for Airports.
1:40-3:00 not my thing.... i was fuckin with the ambient electro.... electric guitars and drums taking me by surprise. very different song now but i see where it takes me and...
3:00-4:10 could you post the lyrics?
4:15-5:15 this is nice i like the break and the build at the end
5:15-7:20 i'm head banging
5 stars. You got different sections and styles happening here. I like that.
Yeah Brian Eno was a huge influence. I love all the "Ambient" albums and "The Pearl" with Harold Hubb. Don't know Eluvium tho... I'll check it out.
You can find the lyrics here: