Wow, this was great! I actually listened to the whole thing, and you know, for me, that's saying something. :)
Hey guys, here's the lead single from my upcoming debut album, "Christopher Tom"!
You can stream my debut EP here: https://christophertom.bandcamp.com/album/the-christopher-tom-ep-2
You can check out this single on YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcjW1xCfYjQ
[Verse 1]
Get with the times and turn on your mind
You party like there's no tomorrow
You never know what you might find
In the midst of all that pain and sorrow
[Verse 2]
You put on a smile every day and night
But no one knows just what you're hiding
So get on the dance floor and shake it up
You work all day so time to ignite
[Pre-Chorus 1]
Oooo-ooo-ooh, move your feet and take it up a notch
Oooo-ooh, baby, take it up a bit for me
Oooo-ooo-ooh, move your feet and take it up a notch
Oooo-ooh, baby, take it up a bit for me
[Chorus 1]
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
[Verse 3]
You work all day but no one knows
So party like there's no tomorrow
You never know what you might find
And you have to steal and beg and borrow
[Verse 4]
You put on a smile every day and night
But no one knows just what you're hiding
So get on the dance floor and shake it up
You work all day so time to ignite
[Pre-Chorus 2]
Oooo-ooo-ooh, move your feet and take it up a notch
Oooo-ooh, baby, take it up a bit for me
Oooo-ooo-ooh, move your feet and take it up a notch
Oooo-ooh, baby, take it up a bit for me
[Chorus 2]
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
[Synth Solo]
[Chorus 3]
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
[Chorus 4]
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Every Friday night, dance for me right now
Wow, this was great! I actually listened to the whole thing, and you know, for me, that's saying something. :)
Thanks for listening! It means a lot.
Only one thing I could say, It sounds like "Dance with me right now" and not "Dance for me right now" for the lyrics every time it comes up. It's nothing big at all though.
Other than that it sounded really good man, Keep it up!! Made me want to go check out your other submissions because of how good it sounded. Definitely plenty of unheard of talent here!
I've always wanted to try to get into songwriting and incorporating vocals with my tracks, is there any tips you could give for someone that can make the quality of the vocals that much better?
Thanks for listening! It's actually "Dance with me right now," I just made a mistake in the lyrics. I'm glad you liked what you heard! I personally use heavy compression on my vocals, and I've found that tweaking the EQ so the mid-highs are more prominent gives the vocals more clarity.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.