There's just one thing you're sort of missing from this song: a sub bass. I recommend using a sine wave, something not too intense, but fills in an absence of sound in the lower frequency range. A note like that in the 1st or 2nd octave would work well for that.
JESUS!!! WHAT HAVE U DONE 2 ME!!
IT'S...IT'S... THE BEST!!
OMG MUST DOWNLOAD!! GG WELL DONE DOMYEAH!!
I WISH A CAN RATE INFINITE STARS :C
Thank you man! :))
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.