hmm, this really was an excellent ending piece Keth-Andril. I listened to it for nearly an hour straight, and it really does give me that vibe of ending. I get credits scrolling down my head, a guy walking away, never looking back kind of feeling.
Then the guitar comes in, and the guy suddenly jumps into the air, and starts running, excited at something.
In any case, it was a very well produced piece. Is that you playing the guitar? It sounds real, and it's played well.
In any case, this was a great track, i'm sorry I don't have any suggestions on making it better, this was fine the way it was. I'd like to invite you to listen to my work sometime. Here's my 5 bomb for you Keth, keep them coming!