I like the instrumentation quite a bit! It has just the right amount of light-heartedness and joy mixed into it.
However, the piece felt overall static and didn't have much happening, harmony-wise.
The strings and music-box(?) dictate the rhythm, and they stay pretty much the same all along the piece. There's this part at the end that feels like it should be slower and lead up to the finale, but the rhythm stays the same. Consider mixing up the accompanying instruments; it will do miracles.
Thanks for reading!
-TheSuperDodo
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Suggestions for better genre calssification will be appreciated.
You may (but probably don't) remember that a while back I uploaded Kite's demo. If you're wondering why it took me so long to orchestrate it, it's because I had a pretty big problem with trying to learn FL studio. most of the learning process was expiremental at best, and sounded like you when your pet died at worst.
After I have finaly managed to understand some basic things, I tried to orchestrate Kite, and this is the result.
Things that I used to make this-
FL Studio (Demo)
DSK Overture
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