This is pretty good. You should make album and see if it can take off, you got the skill enough to make it happen!

This sounds really epic. I am not that much in analyzing instruments, etc., but I want to say it sounds like a fully-fledged soundtrack. It gives you a feeling of coolness and drive.
And other thing to give a credit for is that you released 2 versions, with and without lyrics, both defenitely are great.
Total respect to you, Cethic.