\m/_Not there yet!_\m/
YAY!
At least you're interested in music making!
Not so yay...
You're using basic GarageBand loops to make a song, and you're not using "you", per se, to make the music. When you compose your own loops, or melodies and basslines, and sounds, you get yourself into the music. The sole purpose of music is to express feeling, and with this, you can't do that.
-Keep trying man! Just keep researching, asking questions to audio regulars in the Audio BBS, research music making programs just as Fruity Loops and Reason, and maybe even GarageBand more to see how you can make your OWN loops, melodies and the whatnot. You'll get it man, you'll get it!
-SuperDrummer146-
Check my audio, especially my "Dreamerz" series.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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